Re: [Idr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: "Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)
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Juan,

Thank you for your reply, I would indeed use your proposed  '[RFC8955] section 6 states:'

Regards

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: "Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)" <jalcaide@cisco.com>
Date: Tuesday, 18 May 2021 at 21:10
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid@ietf.org>, "idr-chairs@ietf.org" <idr-chairs@ietf.org>, "idr@ietf.org" <idr@ietf.org>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, "aretana.ietf@gmail.com" <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
Subject: RE: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

    Thanks Eric for your comments. I'll incorporate them. 

    I would use ' Section 6 of [RFC8955] states:'

    But is there any format to refer to an RFC + specific section of that RFC


    I used ' validation procedure specified in <xref target="RFC8955" />, section 6'
    and in https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14  it's using the wrong hyperlink.

    Should I just remove the ",",  and do  '[RFC8955] section 6 states:' ?

    -J


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    Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

    Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: No Objection

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    COMMENT:
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    Thank you for the work put into this document.

    Special thanks to Susan Hares for her recent and detailed shepherd's write up.

    Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be appreciated).

    I hope that this helps to improve the document,

    Regards,

    -éric

    == COMMENTS ==

    Is there any reason why the shepherd is not acknowledged in the document ?

    -- Section 2 --
    Strongly suggest s/protocol port numbers/protocol or port numbers/

    Please expand "RR" at first use.

    -- Section 4.2 --
    Suggest to add also a reference to section 4 of RFC 8955 rather than "[RFC8955] states:"