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[Idr] Re: Adoption call for IANA Registrations for the BGP Finite State Machine (FSM) (ending 31 May, 2024)

Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org> Sat, 25 May 2024 18:43 UTC

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Tom,

Tracking edits toward -02 or adoption:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fsm-iana/pull/4 <https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fsm-iana/pull/4>



> On May 25, 2024, at 5:44 AM, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> wrote:
> 
> I may go through all the names to see if they are exactly the same as in the RFC but may not have time to in the next five days.  They look ok at first reading.
> 
> This thought is triggered by 
> 1- the Abstract
> which contains a [reference]

In diff.

> and which uses 'this draft'

s/draft/document/

> and seems inconsistent as to 'Finite State Machine' or 'finite state machine' - I think that the former is better.

The capitalized version is used in section headers and registry names.


> All of which suggests that some editing may be needed.

And certainly aside from list feedback, feel free to open issues or submit pull requests to the github repository.

-- Jeff

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