Return-Path: X-Original-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4140DC14F5EC for ; Sat, 25 May 2024 11:43:15 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -6.899 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-6.899 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_HI=-5, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id d-z7incchzrn for ; Sat, 25 May 2024 11:43:14 -0700 (PDT) Received: from slice.pfrc.org (slice.pfrc.org [67.207.130.108]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id F4085C14F5E6 for ; Sat, 25 May 2024 11:43:13 -0700 (PDT) Received: from smtpclient.apple (172-125-100-52.lightspeed.livnmi.sbcglobal.net [172.125.100.52]) by slice.pfrc.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id E6D951E039; Sat, 25 May 2024 14:43:12 -0400 (EDT) Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="Apple-Mail=_28A61448-EF05-4CC1-B1B2-E55E181528EA" Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3696.120.41.1.8\)) From: Jeffrey Haas In-Reply-To: Date: Sat, 25 May 2024 14:43:12 -0400 Message-Id: References: <20240524143725.GA24975@pfrc.org> To: tom petch X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3696.120.41.1.8) Message-ID-Hash: NV3ASBL74ICURHRHQW3ICQ32WZ4DKX4T X-Message-ID-Hash: NV3ASBL74ICURHRHQW3ICQ32WZ4DKX4T X-MailFrom: jhaas@pfrc.org X-Mailman-Rule-Misses: dmarc-mitigation; no-senders; approved; emergency; loop; banned-address; member-moderation; header-match-idr.ietf.org-0; nonmember-moderation; administrivia; implicit-dest; max-recipients; max-size; news-moderation; no-subject; digests; suspicious-header CC: "idr@ietf.org" X-Mailman-Version: 3.3.9rc4 Precedence: list Subject: =?utf-8?q?=5BIdr=5D_Re=3A_Adoption_call_for_IANA_Registrations_for_the_BGP_F?= =?utf-8?q?inite_State_Machine_=28FSM=29_=28ending_31_May=2C_2024=29?= List-Id: Inter-Domain Routing Archived-At: List-Archive: List-Help: List-Owner: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: --Apple-Mail=_28A61448-EF05-4CC1-B1B2-E55E181528EA Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Tom, Tracking edits toward -02 or adoption: https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fsm-iana/pull/4 = > On May 25, 2024, at 5:44 AM, tom petch wrote: >=20 > I may go through all the names to see if they are exactly the same as = in the RFC but may not have time to in the next five days. They look ok = at first reading. >=20 > This thought is triggered by=20 > 1- the Abstract > which contains a [reference] In diff. > and which uses 'this draft' s/draft/document/ > and seems inconsistent as to 'Finite State Machine' or 'finite state = machine' - I think that the former is better. The capitalized version is used in section headers and registry names. > All of which suggests that some editing may be needed. And certainly aside from list feedback, feel free to open issues or = submit pull requests to the github repository. -- Jeff --Apple-Mail=_28A61448-EF05-4CC1-B1B2-E55E181528EA Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Content-Type: text/html; charset=us-ascii Tom,

Tracking edits toward -02 or adoption:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-idr/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-fsm-iana/pull= /4



On May 25, 2024, at 5:44 AM, tom petch <ietfc@btconnect.com>= wrote:

I may go through all the names to see if they are exactly the = same as in the RFC but may not have time to in the next five days. =  They look ok at first reading.

This = thought is triggered by
1- the Abstract
which= contains a [reference]

In diff.

and which uses = 'this draft'

s/draft/document/

and seems = inconsistent as to 'Finite State Machine' or 'finite state machine' - I = think that the former is better.

The = capitalized version is used in section headers and registry = names.


All of which = suggests that some editing may be needed.

And certainly aside = from list feedback, feel free to open issues or submit pull requests to = the github repository.

-- = Jeff

= --Apple-Mail=_28A61448-EF05-4CC1-B1B2-E55E181528EA--