Re: [Idr] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10

Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 11 May 2022 02:41 UTC

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From: Ketan Talaulikar <ketant.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 11 May 2022 08:11:00 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-app-specific-attr-10
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Hi Kristy,

Thanks for your review and feedback. We'll trim the abstract to only
include the 2nd paragraph.

Thanks,
Ketan


On Mon, May 9, 2022 at 7:03 PM Kirsty Paine via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Reviewer: Kirsty Paine
> Review result: Ready
>
> This draft is clear, well-written and I find only one minor issue as
> follows:
> - Abstract: It takes a while until the abstract tells me what the document
> does
> and it doesn't cover the full scope of what it documents. I would move the
> last
> sentence to the start, and then explain the backstory/specifics if it's
> still
> needed, and include the information in the last paragraph of Section 1.
> This
> will help interested readers find your draft and its relevance to them more
> quickly.
>
>
>