[Idr] Re: [spring] request for review and comments

[linchangwang <[e-mail]>]

Hi Alvaro,

       Thank you for your comments and suggestions, version-06 has been updated to include an explanation for the updated RFC:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lin-idr-sr-epe-over-l2bundle/06/


1.     Before the update to RFC9085: [RFC9085] does not specify the support of BGP EPE over L2 Bundle


After the update:
This document updates [RFC9085] to allow the L2 Bundle Member Attributes TLV to be added to the BGP-LS Attribute associated with the Link NLRI of BGP peering link.



2.     Before the update to RFC9086: RFC9086 only specifies how BGP-LS advertises IGP L2 Bundle Member Attributes information through the L2 Bundle Member Attributes TLV, with no mention of how BGP EPE over   L2 Bundle can be advertised through BGP-LS.

After the update:
This document updates [RFC9085] and [RFC9086] to allow the PeerAdj SID TLV to be included as a sub-TLV of the L2 Bundle Member Attributes TLV.


Thanks,
Changwang

发件人: Alvaro Retana <[e-mail]>
发送时间: 2024年5月15日 16:26
收件人: linchangwang (RD) <[e-mail]>
抄送: [e-mail]; idr-chairs <[e-mail]>; draft-lin-idr-sr-epe-over-l2bundle <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; [e-mail]
主题: Re: [spring] request for review and comments

Hi!

If you want to formally update other RFCs, you need to do several other things: include a tag in the header, indicate the update in the Abstract and Introduction, and indicate what are the text changes (if any) to the original RFCs.

While I still think the (formal) update is not needed, it may be a discussion to be had if the document is adopted.

Thanks!

Alvaro.


On May 15, 2024 at 7:51:46 AM, linchangwang ([e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>) wrote:
Therefore, the update proposed in section 3.1 is needed.
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