Re: [Idr] IPR and WG LC for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions (11/1 to 11/16)

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] IPR and WG LC for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions (11/1 to 11/16)
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Hi Dhruv,

Thanks for your review and ack for all the comments except the last one on the references. The IGP specs have been traditionally used as normative in BGP-LS and so I would prefer to keep it that way here too.

Thanks,
Ketan

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From: Idr <idr-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Dhruv Dhody
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Subject: Re: [Idr] IPR and WG LC for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions (11/1 to 11/16)

Hi WG,

I support publication, the extension is useful and the document clear.

Just a few nits -

- Expand LSP, PW, iBGP, eBGP on first use
- s/Type: 1032/Type: 1032 (early allocated by IANA)/
- Section 4, you have -

   The S-BFD Discriminators TLV can only be added to the BGP-LS
   Attribute associated with the Node NLRI that originates the
   corresponding underlying IGP TLV/sub-TLV as described below.

and then the next paragraph -

   When the node is not running any of the IGPs but running a protocol
   like BGP, ...

I suggest removing the "only" as it adds to confusion as non-IGP cases are allowed as well.

- Check if RFC7883 and RFC7884 are better suited as informative.

Thanks!
Dhruv






On Mon, Nov 2, 2020 at 8:14 AM Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> wrote:
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> This begins a 2 week WG LC for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions (11/1 to 11/16).
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> This is the second WG LC call since the initial call had only 1 reponse besides the authors.
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> You can access the draft at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensions
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> We have a report of draft has 1 implementation from Nokia:
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> https://trac.ietf.org/trac/idr/wiki/draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sbfd-extensi
> ons%20implementations
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> We are missing IPR statements from Sam Aldrin and Greg Minsky.
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> The co-authors should encourage these authors to submit IPR statements
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> by Tuesday (11/3/2020).
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> In your responses please consider the following questions:
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> a) Do you know any issues with this technology?
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> b) Will this technology help BGP-LS deployments?
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> c) Is this draft ready for publication?
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> If you know of any additional implementations, please
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> send email to the WG chairs or respond to this email
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> with the information.
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> Cheers, Susan Hares
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