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charset="Windows-1252" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable MIME-Version: 1.0 X-OriginatorOrg: btconnect.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthAs: Internal X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-AuthSource: AM7PR07MB6248.eurprd07.prod.outlook.com X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-Network-Message-Id: 0fdfa209-88d5-41b8-aeed-08d937b92e1f X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-originalarrivaltime: 25 Jun 2021 09:11:13.0945 (UTC) X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-fromentityheader: Hosted X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-id: cf8853ed-96e5-465b-9185-806bfe185e30 X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-mailboxtype: HOSTED X-MS-Exchange-CrossTenant-userprincipalname: nz7C/HriB+tSA90ijkUgx0iF6z5XnrYz4toXxFqnOqpSkIe5dwIGfMHscb5AWsO7EGclM75SvjKAzpjAPr1P1A== X-MS-Exchange-Transport-CrossTenantHeadersStamped: AM6PR07MB5059 Archived-At: Subject: Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08 X-BeenThere: idr@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Inter-Domain Routing List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 25 Jun 2021 09:11:20 -0000 From: Idr on behalf of Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) =0A= Sent: 24 June 2021 13:17=0A= =0A= Hi Dan,=0A= =0A= Thanks a lot for your review and feedback.=0A= =0A= Regarding your comment; we=92ve chosen to expand all abbreviations on first= use in the document instead of an abbreviation section. It is possible tha= t we might have missed something or not added references for them. It would= help a lot if you could point to a few such instances so we can fix them.= =0A= =0A= =0A= =0A= USP (Unique Selling Point?)=0A= PSP=0A= =0A= They both get an expansion in RFC8986=0A= =0A= Tom Petch.=0A= =0A= Thanks,=0A= Ketan=0A= =0A= From: Dan Romascanu =0A= Sent: 24 June 2021 16:25=0A= To: Dan Romascanu =0A= Cc: ops-dir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext.all@ietf.org; idr@ietf.= org=0A= Subject: Re: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08=0A= =0A= In the second paragraph, I meant Section 10.=0A= =0A= Sorry for skipping that.=0A= =0A= Regards=0A= =0A= Dan=0A= =0A= =0A= On Thu, Jun 24, 2021 at 11:16 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker > wrote:=0A= Reviewer: Dan Romascanu=0A= Review result: Ready=0A= =0A= Ready with one editorial comment.=0A= =0A= The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS = and=0A= also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My princ= ipal=0A= editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references t= o=0A= the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the li= fe=0A= easier for future users of the document.=0A= =0A= I appreciate Section of the document which describes the operations and=0A= manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is th= e=0A= section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks= =0A= short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other= =0A= documents.=0A= =0A= =0A=