Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis
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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
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Hi Jeff, I've incorporated the 2 updates that you've ack-ed into the edit buffer. I will wait for your advice/text for the one last point that remains before posting the v10 update. Thanks, Ketan -----Original Message----- From: Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@pfrc.org> Sent: 10 November 2021 16:52 To: Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) <ketant@cisco.com> Cc: draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis@ietf.org; idr@ietf.org Subject: Re: Document shepherd review for draft-ietf-idr-rfc7752bis Ketan, On Wed, Nov 10, 2021 at 08:56:00AM +0000, Ketan Talaulikar (ketant) wrote: > > A critical detail is you've added "A BGP-LS Consumer would need the ability to merge..." and we're not asking routers carrying this information to do the work. > [KT] Yes, that is correct. This distinction and boundary between the "BGP protocol module" and "BGP-LS Consumer module" is precisely why we've introduced these terminologies and clarifications in Sec 3. IIRC (it been a few years now), this was one of the key inputs that I got from Alvaro for this bis. I'll spend some time hopefully today to try to re-read sections 3 and 7.2. > > 447 The TLVs within the BGP-LS Attribute MAY be ordered in ascending > > 448 order by TLV type. BGP-LS Attribute with unordered TLVs MUST NOT be > > 449 considered malformed. > > > > Probably "SHOULD be ordered"? If it's MAY be ordered and MUST NOT be malformed, why mention it at all? > > [KT] I am happy to drop both the sentences. The current text is more to clarify given the ambiguity in this regards in RFC7752. > > I'd suggest leaving it and update to SHOULD. Reinforcing that unordered isn't malformed will likely save us implementations that didn't deal with that. > [KT] Just to be confirm - you are saying "SHOULD be ordered; if not then MUST NOT be considered malformed" - if so, that sounds good to me. That's the suggestion. > > It'd be helpful to clarify that these are features from the OSPF protocol but that the code points are not defined within OSPF - or at least what OSPF code point feature they're intended to cover. > [KT] How about the following? > > s/ The OSPF Route Type field values are defined in the OSPF protocol and can be one of the following: / The OSPF Route Type field follows the route types defined in the OSPF protocol and can be one of the following: That would clarify the point. -- Jeff
- [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf-idr… Jeffrey Haas
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Jeffrey Haas
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Jeffrey Haas
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Jeffrey Haas
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Jeffrey Haas
- Re: [Idr] Document shepherd review for draft-ietf… Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)