Re: [Idr] 答复: Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to 8/22]

"Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com> Tue, 20 August 2019 10:44 UTC

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Aijun Wang <wangaijun@tsinghua.org.cn>, "'Susan Hares'" <shares@ndzh.com>, "'idr wg'" <idr@ietf.org>
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Hi Aijun,

Thanks for your review and please check inline for responses.

From: Idr <idr-bounces@ietf.org>; On Behalf Of Aijun Wang
Sent: 15 August 2019 13:26
To: 'Susan Hares' <shares@ndzh.com>;; 'idr wg' <idr@ietf.org>;
Subject: [Idr] 答复: Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to 8/22]


Support the adoption.

As pointed out at the appendix-A<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01#appendix-A>;, I think this document has made amounts clarification and update to the implementation of BGP-LS protocol.



Some comments are the bellowing:

1. Is it possible to converge this document with Adrian’s draft<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-farrel-idr-bgp-ls-registry/>? Both are trying to update RFC7752.

[KT]  We discussed this on the thread and the conclusion was to progress Adrian’s draft faster to simplify the allocation while this RFC7752 bis draft will likely take longer time and once published, it will also obsolete Adrian’s RFC besides RFC7752.



2. Draft [draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext]<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext/> is to solve the reports of inter-AS links. Is it more convenient for the reader to get such information via referencing it at section 4.6<https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01#section-4.6>?

[KT] Agree and I think it helps to put this reference.



Thanks,

Ketan



Best Regards.

Aijun Wang
China Telecom

发件人: idr-bounces@ietf.org<mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org> [mailto:idr-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Susan Hares
发送时间: 2019年8月9日 3:31
收件人: 'idr wg'
主题: [Idr] Adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to 8/22]

This begins a 2 week adoption call for draft-ketant-idr-rfc7752bis-01.txt [8/8 to 8/22/2019]

In your comments please indicate “support” or “no support”.

The chair and AD feel that a revision to RFC7752 is needed
to specify additional error handling.  Please consider
if this draft is a good place to start for this revision.

Cheerily, Susan Hares