Return-Path: X-Original-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Delivered-To: idr@ietfa.amsl.com Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id BB843120026; Thu, 30 May 2019 23:28:53 -0700 (PDT) X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com X-Spam-Flag: NO X-Spam-Score: -4.2 X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-4.2 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, HTML_MESSAGE=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-2.3, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id 1QJlhGbdzNsb; Thu, 30 May 2019 23:28:52 -0700 (PDT) Received: from huawei.com (lhrrgout.huawei.com [185.176.76.210]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES256-GCM-SHA384 (256/256 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 32045120052; Thu, 30 May 2019 23:28:52 -0700 (PDT) Received: from LHREML714-CAH.china.huawei.com (unknown [172.18.7.107]) by Forcepoint Email with ESMTP id C352785B219D9AFA0E04; Fri, 31 May 2019 07:28:49 +0100 (IST) Received: from NKGEML412-HUB.china.huawei.com (10.98.56.73) by LHREML714-CAH.china.huawei.com (10.201.108.37) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.408.0; Fri, 31 May 2019 07:28:49 +0100 Received: from NKGEML515-MBX.china.huawei.com ([fe80::a54a:89d2:c471:ff]) by nkgeml412-hub.china.huawei.com ([10.98.56.73]) with mapi id 14.03.0415.000; Fri, 31 May 2019 14:28:37 +0800 From: Zhuangshunwan To: "draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis@ietf.org" CC: "idr@ietf.org" Thread-Topic: Comments on draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis Thread-Index: AdUXd/x/5Q2EPrkLTJqVc1rN98FLhw== Date: Fri, 31 May 2019 06:28:36 +0000 Message-ID: <19AB2A007F56DB4E8257F949A2FB9858E5BAA1E0@NKGEML515-MBX.china.huawei.com> Accept-Language: zh-CN, en-US Content-Language: zh-CN X-MS-Has-Attach: X-MS-TNEF-Correlator: x-originating-ip: [10.130.202.166] Content-Type: multipart/alternative; boundary="_000_19AB2A007F56DB4E8257F949A2FB9858E5BAA1E0NKGEML515MBXchi_" MIME-Version: 1.0 X-CFilter-Loop: Reflected Archived-At: Subject: [Idr] Comments on draft-ietf-idr-rfc5575bis X-BeenThere: idr@ietf.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: Inter-Domain Routing List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 31 May 2019 06:28:54 -0000 --_000_19AB2A007F56DB4E8257F949A2FB9858E5BAA1E0NKGEML515MBXchi_ Content-Type: text/plain; charset="gb2312" Content-Transfer-Encoding: base64 RGVhciBhdXRob3JzLA0KDQpJIGhhdmUgcmVhZCB0aGlzIGRvY3VtZW50IGFuZCBmb3VuZCB0aGF0 IHNvbWUgdGV4dCBtYXkgaGF2ZSBxdWVzdGlvbnMuDQoNCiMxDQoNCjQuMi45LiAgVHlwZSA5IC0g VENQIGZsYWdzDQoNCg0KDQqhrQ0KDQogICAgMCAgIDEgICAyICAgMyAgIDQgICA1ICAgNiAgIDcN Cg0KICAgKy0tLSstLS0rLS0tKy0tLSstLS0rLS0tKy0tLSstLS0rDQoNCiAgIHwgZSB8IGEgfCAg bGVuICB8IDAgfCAwIHxub3R8IG0gfA0KDQogICArLS0tKy0tLSstLS0rLS0tKy0tLSstLS0rLS0t Ky0tLSsNCg0KDQoNCiAgICAgIEJpdG1hc2sgZm9ybWF0DQpbU2h1bndhbl0gIFRoZSChsEJpdG1h c2sgZm9ybWF0obEgaGVyZSBzaG91bGQgYmUgobBCaXRtYXNrIG9wZXJhbmQgZm9ybWF0obEgLg0K DQoNCiMyDQo0LjIuMTAuICBUeXBlIDEwIC0gUGFja2V0IGxlbmd0aA0KDQogICAgICBFbmNvZGlu Zzo8dHlwZSAoMSBvY3RldCksIFtvcCwgYml0bWFza10rPg0KW1NodW53YW5dICBUaGUgobBiaXRt YXNrobEgaGVyZSBzaG91bGQgYmUgobB2YWx1ZaGxLg0KDQoNClBsZWFzZSBjb3JyZWN0IG1lIGlm IEkgZGlkbid0IHVuZGVyc3RhbmQgaXQgY29ycmVjdGx5LCB0aGFuayB5b3WjoQ0KDQpCZXN0IHJl Z2FyZHMsDQpTaHVud2FuDQo= --_000_19AB2A007F56DB4E8257F949A2FB9858E5BAA1E0NKGEML515MBXchi_ Content-Type: text/html; charset="gb2312" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable

Dear authors,

 

I have read this document and found that some text m= ay have questions.

 

#1

4.2.9.  Type 9 - TCP flags
 
=A1=AD
    0   1   2   3 &n=
bsp; 4   5   6   7
   +---+---+---+---+---+---+---&=
#43;---+
   | e | a |  len  | 0 | 0 |not| m |

   +---+---+---+---+---+---+---&=
#43;---+


 


      Bitmask format


[Shunwan]  The =A1=B0Bitmask format=A1=B1 here =
should be =A1=B0Bitmask operand format=A1=B1 .


 


 


#2


4.2.10.  Type 10 - Packet length

 


      Encoding:<type (1 octet)=
, [op, bitmask]+>


[Shunwan]  
The =A1=B0bitmask=A1=B1 here should be =A1=B0value=A1=B1.=



 


 


Please correct me if I didn't understand it correctl=
y, thank you=A3=A1=



 


Best regards,


Shunwan
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