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Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

"Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com> Thu, 24 June 2021 12:17 UTC

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From: "Ketan Talaulikar (ketant)" <ketant@cisco.com>
To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [Idr] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08
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Hi Dan,

Thanks a lot for your review and feedback.

Regarding your comment; we’ve chosen to expand all abbreviations on first use in the document instead of an abbreviation section. It is possible that we might have missed something or not added references for them. It would help a lot if you could point to a few such instances so we can fix them.

Thanks,
Ketan

From: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Sent: 24 June 2021 16:25
To: Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>
Cc: ops-dir@ietf.org; draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext.all@ietf.org; idr@ietf.org
Subject: Re: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-srv6-ext-08

In the second paragraph, I meant Section 10.

Sorry for skipping that.

Regards

Dan


On Thu, Jun 24, 2021 at 11:16 AM Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu
Review result: Ready

Ready with one editorial comment.

The document is well written, but it requires good familiarity with BGP-LS and
also reading 4 companion documents which are all work-in-progress. My principal
editorial comment would be that an abbreviations section (with references to
the sources of the terms) would greatly improve readability and make the life
easier for future users of the document.

I appreciate Section of the document which describes the operations and
manageability aspects following the recommendations of RFC 5706. This is the
section in the document that must be read by operators. Note that it looks
short but is actually quite rich in information and refers to a few other
documents.

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