Re: Another attempt at plain language

Michael Everson <everson@evertype.com> Mon, 14 September 2015 10:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: Another attempt at plain language
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On 13 Sep 2015, at 18:03, Shawn Steele <Shawn.Steele@microsoft.com> wrote:

> 3.1.5 Reading Level: When text requires reading ability more advanced than the lower secondary education level after removal of proper names and titles, supplemental content, or a version that does not require reading ability more advanced than the lower secondary education level, is available. (Level AAA)

“Lower secondary education level”?

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