Re: [ietf-smtp] New Version Notification for draft-crocker-email-deliveredto-00.txt

Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Mon, 15 February 2021 02:26 UTC

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To: John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com>, Pete Resnick <resnick@episteme.net>, dcrocker@bbiw.net
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From: Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net>
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Subject: Re: [ietf-smtp] New Version Notification for draft-crocker-email-deliveredto-00.txt
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On 2/14/2021 5:43 PM, John C Klensin wrote:
> So I would agree that whatever this document chooses to say
> should be clear.


If the procedural aspects of the existing language are not already 
clear, please explain and then please offer alternative text.



d/

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Dave Crocker
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