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Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Mon, 15 February 2021 05:31 UTC

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To: John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com>
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From: Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net>
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Subject: Re: [ietf-smtp] New Version Notification for draft-crocker-email-deliveredto-00.txt
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John,

Thanks, but his note did neither of the things I requested.

The thread up to the point of your posted had not converged on needing 
specific changes. Hence my request.

If you want changes, please me specific about what specific text is 
problematic, why, and what text you believe will fix it.


d/


On 2/14/2021 9:26 PM, John C Klensin wrote:
> 
> 
> --On Sunday, February 14, 2021 18:25 -0800 Dave Crocker
> <dhc@dcrocker.net> wrote:
> 
>> On 2/14/2021 5:43 PM, John C Klensin wrote:
>>> So I would agree that whatever this document chooses to say
>>> should be clear.
>>
>>
>> If the procedural aspects of the existing language are not
>> already clear, please explain and then please offer
>> alternative text.
> 
> Please see Pete's comments to which I was responding.


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Dave Crocker
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