RE: Gen-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-05

Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@huawei.com> Thu, 05 January 2017 15:05 UTC

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From: Huaimo Chen <huaimo.chen@huawei.com>
To: Orit Levin <oritl@microsoft.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Gen-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-05
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Hi Orit,

    Thanks much for your time for reviewing the document. 
    We will fix the nits.

Best Regards,
Huaimo
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Subject: Gen-Art Last Call review of draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-05

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.



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Document: draft-ietf-ospf-ttz-05

Reviewer: Orit Levin

Review Date: 2017-01-03

IETF LC End Date: 2017-01-03

IESG Telechat date: (if known)



Summary:

This draft is well-written and well organized. It is basically ready for publication, but has a couple of nits that should be fixed before publication