Re: Gen-art review of draft-ietf-rmt-bb-norm-revised-05.txt
Brian Adamson <adamson@itd.nrl.navy.mil> Fri, 27 June 2008 19:32 UTC
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Elwyn, Thank you. I have incorporated your editorial notes below into the xml source. best regards, Brian Adamson adamson@itd.nrl.navy.mil On Jun 27, 2008, at 3:04 PM, Elwyn Davies wrote: > I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) > reviewer > for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see > http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before > posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-rmt-bb-norm-revised-05.txt > Reviewer: Elwyn Davies > Review Date: 27 June 2008 > IESG Telechat date: 3 July 2008 > > Summary: > Ready. This update has addressed all the issues I raised in my LC > review excellently. > > There are a couple of new and a couple of legacy editorial nits.... > > Editorial: > s2.4: s/specify use/specify use of/ > s3.2.3.1, para 1, last line: s/provided/providing/ > s8: s/George, Gross/George Gross/? > s5, end of para 3: s/if this acceptable/if this is acceptable/ > _______________________________________________ Ietf mailing list Ietf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf
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