Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08.txt> (JSON Patch) to Proposed Standard

"David J. Biesack" <David.Biesack@sas.com> Fri, 14 December 2012 16:46 UTC

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From: "David J. Biesack" <David.Biesack@sas.com>
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Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08.txt> (JSON Patch) to Proposed Standard
Date: Fri, 14 Dec 2012 11:45:47 -0500
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"4.1 add" bullet 3 reads (when completing the introductory sentence)

 ... the target location MUST reference ...
 o An element to add to an existing array.

I think this is incorrect; the target location is the array and the "value" is the "element to add to an existing array". I suggest:

 ... the target location MUST reference ...
 o An existing array.

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