Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02.txt> (Publishing the "Tao of the IETF" as a Web Page) to Informational RFC

John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com> Thu, 05 July 2012 21:34 UTC

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Date: Thu, 05 Jul 2012 17:34:55 -0400
From: John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com>
To: Paul Hoffman <paul.hoffman@vpnc.org>
Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao-as-web-page-02.txt> (Publishing the "Tao of the IETF" as a Web Page) to Informational RFC
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--On Thursday, July 05, 2012 14:19 -0700 Paul Hoffman
<paul.hoffman@vpnc.org> wrote:

> Based on many people's input (most recently, John's), I have
> updated the draft to more cleanly separate out the history of
> the Tao from the change that is happening.

Paul,

While I'd prefer to see you go even further in that direction
(e.g., incorporating more of the RFC 4677 Abstract in this
abstract, constructing things so that changes in the details of
editing procedures doesn't require a revised RFC), this version
is, IMO, greatly improved.

thanks
   john