RE: Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-json-text-sequence-09

"Black, David" <david.black@emc.com> Fri, 05 December 2014 22:54 UTC

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From: "Black, David" <david.black@emc.com>
To: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Subject: RE: Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-json-text-sequence-09
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Ok, it is a nit, as is much of what idnits produces ;-).
I have no problem ignoring idnits on this one ...

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: barryleiba.mailing.lists@gmail.com
> [mailto:barryleiba.mailing.lists@gmail.com] On Behalf Of Barry Leiba
> Sent: Friday, December 05, 2014 5:39 PM
> To: Black, David
> Cc: nico@cryptonector.com; General Area Review Team (gen-art@ietf.org); ops-
> dir@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; json@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: Gen-ART and OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-json-text-sequence-09
> 
> Hi, David.  One note on your review:
> 
> > idnits didn't like the reference to RFC 20 for ASCII:
> >
> >   ** Downref: Normative reference to an Unknown state RFC: RFC   20
> >
> > RFC 5234 (ABNF) uses this, which looks like a better reference:
> >
> >    [US-ASCII]  American National Standards Institute, "Coded Character
> >                Set -- 7-bit American Standard Code for Information
> >                Interchange", ANSI X3.4, 1986.
> 
> Except that (1) many IETF documents do use RFC 20 and (2) the RFC 20
> reference is not for ASCII: it's for RS, the Record Separator
> character, which is explained in RFC 20, Section 5.2.
> 
> Barry