Review of draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-08

Jouni Korhonen <jounikor@gmail.com> Thu, 29 December 2016 11:37 UTC

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Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-ospf-availability-extension-??
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 2016-12-29
IETF LC End Date: 2016-10-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-02-16

Summary: Ready for publication.

Major issues: None.

Minor issues: None.

Nits/editorial comments: 

I reviewed -07 version of the document. The issue I raised back then
has been addressed in an adequate level.
There are still editorial nits in the document like:

* Section 2:
   "include a< availability, bandwidth> information list in its OSPF"
   where the "a<" is somewhat confusing..
* Section 2:
   "node(s).The setup"
   which misses a space. 

However, these nits and alike can be corrected by the RFC Editor.