Re: Proposed Update to Note Well

Sam Hartman <hartmans-ietf@mit.edu> Fri, 22 June 2012 02:45 UTC

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From: Sam Hartman <hartmans-ietf@mit.edu>
To: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>
Subject: Re: Proposed Update to Note Well
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I like Peter's rephrasing  for a number of reasons.

1) Clearly states who is responsible for making the disclosure happen
(the IETf contributor)

2) Defines IETf contribution in its own sentence which makes it easier
to reference later.

3) Makes it clear that things like mailing list conversations are
covered.