Re: Proposed Update to Note Well

David Morris <dwm@xpasc.com> Fri, 22 June 2012 03:32 UTC

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Date: Thu, 21 Jun 2012 20:32:02 -0700
From: David Morris <dwm@xpasc.com>
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Subject: Re: Proposed Update to Note Well
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I agree .. Peter's version is clear and concise.

On Thu, 21 Jun 2012, Sam Hartman wrote:

> I like Peter's rephrasing  for a number of reasons.
> 
> 1) Clearly states who is responsible for making the disclosure happen
> (the IETf contributor)
> 
> 2) Defines IETf contribution in its own sentence which makes it easier
> to reference later.
> 
> 3) Makes it clear that things like mailing list conversations are
> covered.
>