Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-06

Stewart Bryant <stewart.bryant@gmail.com> Fri, 03 March 2017 11:14 UTC

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion-06
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-03-03
IETF LC End Date: 2017-02-21
IESG Telechat date: 2017-03-16

Summary:  This is a well written document with two very minor nits.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

1.  Introduction
....
   exploited in the attacks document in [RFC7258] and the threats
s/document/documented/

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EDNS0 ought to be expanded.

Review of draft-hardie-privsec-metadata-insertion… Stewart Bryant