Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-08

Roni Even <> Tue, 05 September 2017 11:20 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-taps-transports-usage-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-09-05
IETF LC End Date: 2017-09-14
IESG Telechat date: 2017-09-14

Summary: The document is ready with nits to be published as informational RFC

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
1. I think it will be better to have the introduction as section 1 and the
terminology as section 2 2.In section 3.1 in "open" I did not understand the
following sentence "more than TCP's maximum segment size (minus options used in
the SYN)" 3. in section 6 "The views expressed are solely those of the
author(s)" suggest removing the sentence since this document expresses the
views of the WG. 4. A general readability comment when describing primitives in
pass 2 the structure is
                              Pass 1 primitive / event:
but it will be easier to read if there is for example a line space between the
paragraphs. look for example at CONNECT.TCP: it is difficult to see where
parameters finish and comment starts