Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tls-chacha20-poly1305-04

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 29 March 2016 21:22 UTC

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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tls-chacha20-poly1305-04
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-tls-chacha20-poly1305-04

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2016-3-28

IETF LC End Date: 2016-4-9

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a standard track
RFC.

 

 

 

Major issues:

I am wondering why this is a standard track document and not informational
since the registration requirements are specification required.  (RFC5246)

 

I am also wondering why this document updates RFC5246 and RFC6347 

 

Minor issues:

 

Nits/editorial comments: