Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
Joel Halpern via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 10 October 2019 22:56 UTC
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Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11 Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review Date: 2019-10-10 IETF LC End Date: None IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17 Summary: This document is almost ready for publication as an RFC. I have received no response to my earlier review. Some of the items have been addressed, but not all of them. Major issues: This document clearly defines normative protocol behavior. As such, it would seem to either be Experimental or Proposed Standard, but not Informational. Minor issues: The document incorporates items from a name space "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:epp:b-dn", referred to with the prefix "b-dn:". The only explanation of this meaning is in the terminology section. However, the description does not indicate what document defines this information. Nits/editorial comments: I note and appreciate that my comments on the SHOULD usage in section 7.2 has been addressed.
- Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundl… Joel Halpern via Datatracker
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Jiankang Yao
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… John C Klensin
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Joel Halpern Direct
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… John C Klensin
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Barry Leiba
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Barry Leiba
- RE: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart telechat review of … Eric Gray
- Re: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart telechat review of … Barry Leiba
- RE: [Gen-art] [regext] Genart telechat review of … Eric Gray
- Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… John C Klensin
- Re: Re: [regext] Genart telechat review of draft-… Jiankang Yao