Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04
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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04
Date: Tue, 12 Feb 2013 08:46:16 +0200
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-ancp-pon-04 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-2-12 IETF LC End Date: 2013-2-19 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. OMCI is expanded very late in the document and not on the first usage.
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