Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09.txt> (YANG Data Model for IEEE 1588-2008) to Proposed Standard

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Wed, 29 August 2018 10:32 UTC

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From: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
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Subject: Re: Last Call: <draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09.txt> (YANG Data Model for IEEE 1588-2008) to Proposed Standard
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Looks good; I commented on an earlier version of this document and my
comments have been addressed.

Two further thoughts at this time.

The Security Considerations makes no mention of  RESTCONF, which makes
me think that this is not the usual template for this section.

And I am curious as to what the final wording of A.2 will be.
Currently, it says
"Those IEEE forms and
   mechanisms will be updated as needed during the development of this
   document ..."
so that the IEEE has the IPR to use this RFC as a basis for future work.
The development of this document is nearly, but not quite, complete so
have the forms been produced and signed or when will they be, should the
RFC reference the forms and what form of words will this paragraph use
in the RFC as published? It is a bit like IANA Considerations where the
I-D is proposing an action but the RFC says it has been done.  As I say,
I am curious to see how this is handled.

Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
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> The IESG has received a request from the Timing over IP Connection and
> Transfer of Clock WG (tictoc) to consider the following document: -
'YANG
> Data Model for IEEE 1588-2008'
>   <draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-09.txt> as Proposed Standard
>
> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits
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> Abstract
>
>    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of
>    IEEE 1588-2008 devices and clocks, and also retrieval of the
>    configuration information, data set and running states of IEEE
>    1588-2008 clocks. The YANG module in this document conforms to the
>    Network Management Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
>
> The file can be obtained via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang/
>
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang/ballot/
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> No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D.