Re: Proposed New Note Well

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Mon, 04 January 2016 19:36 UTC

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Subject: Re: Proposed New Note Well
To: John C Klensin <john-ietf@jck.com>, ietf@ietf.org
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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On 05/01/2016 05:05, John C Klensin wrote:
...
> In particular, don't say "By participating with the
> IETF, you agree to follow IETF processes and policies" and then
> identify only a few of them as if they were the complete list.

I thought about trying to express that in my rewrite, but couldn't
see an easy way to cover it. As I repeat from time to time, the hard
way to cover it is http://www.ietf.org/about/process-docs.html .
Good luck in trying to summarise that for the Note Well.

   Brian