Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00
Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Tue, 15 November 2016 01:40 UTC
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From: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>
Date: Tue, 15 Nov 2016 10:40:15 +0900
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Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-leiba-3967upd-downref-00
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Hi, Peter, and thanks for the review. > Page 2, Section 2, 2nd paragraph, 1st sentence: change “case by case” to > “case-by-case”. I'm embarrassed by that, because I'm usually careful about it. I think I must have done some rephrasing (from "do it case by case" to "do it on a case-by-case basis"), and neglected to add the hyphens. They're now in my working version. Barry