Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06

Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com> Mon, 20 August 2018 02:10 UTC

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From: Tianran Zhou <zhoutianran@huawei.com>
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Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-reference-model-06
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Reviewer: Tianran Zhou
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of
the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included
in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors and WG chairs should
treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

I did not see any special operational or network management related issue. This
document is clear to me and is ready for publication.

By the way, do you think "MRACL" in this document need a reference or expansion?

Cheers,
Tianran

Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-anima-refer… Tianran Zhou