RE: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08

"Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)" <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com> Wed, 26 April 2017 07:38 UTC

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From: "Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)" <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>
To: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
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Subject: RE: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
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Date: Wed, 26 Apr 2017 07:38:19 +0000
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Hello Martin,

Thanks, I'll update with RFC 2119 cited at appropriate places 
Sabine


>>-----Original Message-----
>>From: Martin Thomson [mailto:martin.thomson@gmail.com]
>>Sent: 26 April 2017 08:39
>>To: Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-
>>bell-labs.com>
>>Cc: art@ietf.org; alto@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-alto-multi-
>>cost.all@ietf.org
>>Subject: Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
>>
>>On 26 April 2017 at 03:26, Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)
>><sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>; wrote:
>>>>>This document doesn't cite RFC 2119, but it uses the keywords.
>>> [SR     ] RFC 2119 is cited on page 1, section " Requirements Language" and
>>section "9.1.  Normative References". Should it be referenced elsewhere?
>>
>>The convention is to put those in the body, I missed it in the boilerplate.
>>
>>I skimmed the other changes, and they look fine.