Re: Secdir review of draft-ietf-iptel-tel-reg-05

Glen Zorn wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security
> area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat these
> comments just like any other last call comments.  

Glen: Thank you for your time reviewing this.  I will fix the
two new nits below beyond your initial review of April 13, 2008.

> I found no security problems with this draft.  A couple of nits: section
> 4.1, paragraph 1 says "New tel URI parameters and new values for
> existing tel URI parameters MUST be registered by IANA" but I think it
> should be "New tel URI parameters and new values for existing tel URI
> parameters MUST be registered with IANA"; 

Will fix.

> section 5, last sentence says
> "The supporting RFC publications for parameter registrations described
> this specification MUST provide detailed security considerations for
> them." but it seems like there is at least one word missing after
> "described" -- maybe "described in"? 

Will fix.

Thank you.

- vijay
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