RE: [nfsv4] Last Call: <draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt> (Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout) to Proposed Standard

This draft generally looks good.  Looking at this from a SCSI standards perspective,
I found a few small things.  The 512 vs. 4k block size (2.3.1) and reservation scope
(2.4.10.3) items are important - everything else is editorial, although clarity on
commonality with RFC 5663 would be of significant help to any implementer who
has exposure to that.

-- Introduction, last paragraph.

Add a sentence saying that there are no other significant differences from RFC 5663
(previous sentences indicate use of SCSI for fencing and LAYOUTCOMMIT improvements),
e.g., the volume topology (Section 2.3.2) and data structures that describe extents
(Section 2.3.3.) are common with RFC 5663.  Those two examples seem important.

-- Section 2.1, 1st paragraph
	" and the SCSI initiators used for the pNFS Metadata Server and clients MUST
	   support SCSI persistent reservations."
Add a citation of [SPC4] to support that MUST requirement.

-- Section 2.1, 2nd paragraph:

   Clients MUST be able to perform I/O to
   the block extents without affecting additional areas of storage
   (especially important for writes); therefore, extents MUST be aligned
   to 512-byte boundaries.

That assumes a 512 byte logical block size, which is generally ok for now, but 4k is coming.
At a minimum,  "extents MUST be aligned to logical block size boundaries of the logical
units, e.g., 512 bytes."  OTOH, would it be reasonable to just make 4k alignment a MUST
now, as there will be storage systems that need 4k alignment and 4k alignment generally
works better than 512-byte alignment with existing systems?

-- Section 2.3.1

   It is similar to the "Identification
   Descriptor Target Descriptor" specified in [SPC4], but limits the
   allowed values to those that uniquely identify a LU.

I suggest just deleting this sentence, as that is now called an "Identification CSCD Descriptor" - 
if this sentence is retained, the use of those descriptors in EXTENDED COPY would be
important to mention - that seems like a diversion.

   2.  The "DESIGNATOR TYPE" MUST be set to one of four values

T10 is now allowing UUIDs to also be used in the working draft of SPC-5, and those would be
appropriate here.  Nonetheless, I suggest no change until SPC-5 is completed at T10, as this
draft is (properly, IMHO) based on SPC-4.

-- Section 2.4.10.3

   To make sure all I_T nexuses are registered,
   the client SHOULD set the "All Target Ports" (ALL_TG_PT) bit when
   registering the key, or otherwise ensure the registration is
   performed for each initiator port.

It looks like initiator and target registration scopes were conflated here and
need to be separated.  Suggested text:

   To make sure all I_T nexuses are registered,
   the client SHOULD set the "All Target Ports" (ALL_TG_PT) bit when
   registering the key, or otherwise ensure the registration is
   performed for each target port, and MUST perform registration
   for each initiator port.

-- References

Current version of SAM is SAM-5, consider updating SAM-4 reference to SAM-5.

Thanks, --David

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> Subject: [nfsv4] Last Call: <draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt> (Parallel NFS
> (pNFS) SCSI Layout) to Proposed Standard
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> The IESG has received a request from the Network File System Version 4 WG
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> - 'Parallel NFS (pNFS) SCSI Layout'
>   <draft-ietf-nfsv4-scsi-layout-06.txt> as Proposed Standard
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> Abstract
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> 
>    The Parallel Network File System (pNFS) allows a separation between
>    the metadata (onto a metadata server) and data (onto a storage
>    device) for a file.  The SCSI Layout Type is defined in this document
>    as an extension to pNFS to allow the use SCSI based block storage
>    devices.
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