Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Mon, 16 February 2015 12:52 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-6tisch-tsch-05

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015-2-16

IETF LC End Date: 2015-2-20

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational  RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

Some abbreviations are used before they are specified: LLC, WPAN, EB

I was wondering what the purpose of Appendix B is, does it provide any
requirements, in which case it should be part of the main document with
normative language.