Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07

Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Fri, 14 September 2018 21:52 UTC

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Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2018-09-14
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Almost Ready


Major Concerns:

None.


Minor Concerns:

Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174
in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: 

   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
   "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and
   "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP
   14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all
   capitals, as shown here.

Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^.

Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174.

The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add:

	#include <stdint.h>