Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07
Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com> Fri, 14 September 2018 21:52 UTC
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Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-fec-scheme-07 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2018-09-14 IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-24 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Almost Ready Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: Section 2: Please update the first paragraph to reference RFC 8174 in addition to RFC 2119, as follows: The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "NOT RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119] [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown here. Section 2: Please add the definition of ^^. Section 12.1: Please add a normative reference to RFC 8174. The code in Appendix A will not compile using gcc unless you add: #include <stdint.h>
- Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-rlc-f… Russ Housley
- Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-r… Vincent Roca
- Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tsvwg-r… Russ Housley