Re: BCP97bis

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Mon, 18 October 2021 04:31 UTC

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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 17 Oct 2021 21:30:56 -0700
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Subject: Re: BCP97bis
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
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On Sun, Oct 17, 2021 at 7:44 PM Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
wrote:

> } At a minimum,
>
> **prior to WGLC and sectorial review**
>

Ah, I see what you mean.  I thought that was clear from the current text,
but...

Maybe then add:
> "Access to the documents should be noted in the Shepherd write up."
>

...this seems like a good idea.  Added.

-MSK