Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Thu, 03 April 2014 10:48 UTC
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2014-4-3 IETF LC End Date: 2014-4-7 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 1 first paragraph "request packet to any another node"