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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
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Document:  draft-ietf-mpls-lsp-ping-ttl-tlv-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014-4-3

IETF LC End Date: 2014-4-7

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC.

 

 

Major issues:

 

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Nits/editorial comments:

In section 1 first paragraph "request packet to any another node" 

 


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bsp; </span><span =
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style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>IETF LC =
End Date: 2014&#8211;4-7<o:p></o:p></span></p><p =
class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>IESG =
Telechat date: <o:p></o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'><o:p>&nbsp;=
</o:p></span></p><p class=3DMsoPlainText><span =
style=3D'font-size:11.0pt;font-family:"Calibri","sans-serif"'>Summary: =
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paragraph &#8220;request packet to any another node&#8221; =
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