Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07

Matthew Miller <linuxwolf+ietf@outer-planes.net> Thu, 25 October 2018 18:01 UTC

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Reviewer: Matthew Miller
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: 
Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2018-10-25
IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary:

Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits
that ought to be addressed before publication.

Major issues:  NONE

Minor issues:  NONE

Nits/editorial comments:

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an"
should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an
egress router".

* In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of"
should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a
tunnel.".