Re: [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> (Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)) to Internet Standard

Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 17 April 2014 17:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> (Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)) to Internet Standard
From: Yoav Nir <ynir.ietf@gmail.com>
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Hi, Tony

Thanks for the review.

I assume you mean that you don’t sign with public keys. Replacing “sign” with “validate” makes for a strange sentence, because the sentence is about sending (and presumably signing) rather than receiving (and validating).

How about:
“If multiple certificate are sent, the first MUST contain the public key associated with the private key used to sign the AUTH payload”

Yoav


On Apr 17, 2014, at 8:23 PM, PUTMAN, Tony (Tony) <tony.putman@alcatel-lucent.com> wrote:

> All,
> 
> In section 3.6 (top of page 94), there is the statement,
>  "If multiple certificates
>   are sent, the first certificate MUST contain the public key used to
>   sign the AUTH payload."
> 
> "sign" should be "validate".
> 
> Regards,
> Tony
> --
> Tony Putman
> Alcatel-Lucent Technologies
> 
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> Subject: [IPsec] Last Call: <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> (Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)) to Internet Standard
> 
> 
> The IESG has received a request from the IP Security Maintenance and
> Extensions WG (ipsecme) to consider the following document:
> - 'Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)'
>  <draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis-02.txt> as Internet Standard
> 
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> Abstract
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> 
>   This document describes version 2 of the Internet Key Exchange (IKE)
>   protocol.  IKE is a component of IPsec used for performing mutual
>   authentication and establishing and maintaining Security Associations
>   (SAs).  This document replaces and updates RFC 5996, and includes all
>   of the errata for it, and it is intended to update IKEv2 to be
>   Internet Standard.
> 
> 
> 
> 
> The file can be obtained via
> http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-kivinen-ipsecme-ikev2-rfc5996bis/
> 
> IESG discussion can be tracked via
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