Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07

"Rajesh Pazhyannur (rpazhyan)" <rpazhyan@cisco.com> Wed, 11 February 2015 14:00 UTC

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From: "Rajesh Pazhyannur (rpazhyan)" <rpazhyan@cisco.com>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "ietf@ietf.org" <ietf@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07
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Hello Roni

I have made the changes and will post an updated version (version 08) later today.

Thanks

Rajesh

From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com<mailto:ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>>
Date: Tuesday, February 10, 2015 at 12:11 PM
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>;.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-netext-ani-location-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2015–2-10

IETF LC End Date: 2015–2-12

IESG Telechat date:



Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.





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Nits/editorial comments:
In section 1 “PBU” and “WLC” are mentioned but the full name appears later in the document. Should be specified when first used.