Re: New Version Notification for draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-00.txt

Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> Wed, 10 August 2016 13:12 UTC

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Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-leiba-rfc2119-update-00.txt
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> So as I understand it, documents which adhere to rfc2119-update will
> cite BCP14 and the RFCXXXX which this document will have?
> or will it cite RFC2119 and RFCXXXX?
>
> Are you suggesting that we should be citing BCP14 though?

Is there really something unclear about the boilerplate update in Section 2?:

   Authors who follow these guidelines should incorporate this phrase
   near the beginning of their document:

      The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", and
      "MAY" in this document are to be interpreted as described in
      BCP 14 [RFC2119],[RFCxxxx] when, and only when, they appear
      capitalized, as shown.

That is suggesting that we *call* this "BCP 14", and that the
citations be to RFC 2119 and to this document.  That makes it clear
that 2119 applies, as updated by this.

> It seems that retaining section 1.1 might be worth it.

Perhaps, though I don't think it really has archival value.  Do others
think it should be retained?

> XML format and screen readers.
>
> I have not looked deeply into the final RFC-format XML spec.
> Does it already markup SHOULD/MUST/MAY in some useful way?
> Could it?  If it does, should this document point out this?

That's a good point, and I will look into what this might need to say
with respect to the XML markup.

Barry