Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tls-downgrade-scsv-04

Bodo Moeller <bmoeller@acm.org> Fri, 13 February 2015 00:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-tls-downgrade-scsv-04
From: Bodo Moeller <bmoeller@acm.org>
To: Russ Housley <housley@vigilsec.com>
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> Document: draft-ietf-tls-downgrade-scsv-04
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2015-02-12
> IETF LC End Date: 2015-01-23
> IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19
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> Summary: Almost Ready.  One minor item to correct.
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> Major Concerns:
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> None.
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> Minor Concerns:
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> The upper-right corner of the title page and the abstract disagree.  One
> says that this document updates 3 RFCs, and the other says that it
> updates 5 RFCs.  Please correct the abstract.
>

Right, thanks. The sentence in the abstract should be as follows:

"It updates RFC 2246, RFC 4346, RFC 4347, RFC 5246, and RFC 6347."

Bodo