review of I-D.farresnickel-harassment

Larry Masinter <masinter@adobe.com> Mon, 23 March 2015 07:50 UTC

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From: Larry Masinter <masinter@adobe.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, Dan Harkins <dharkins@lounge.org>
Subject: review of I-D.farresnickel-harassment
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"In general, disruptive behavior that occurs
   in the context of an IETF general or working group mailing list, or
   happens in a face-to-face or virtual meeting of a working group or
   the IETF plenary, can be dealt with by our normal procedures, whereas”

I would prefer “In most cases” or “In many cases” over “In general"