Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-bess-mvpn-expl-track-09

Carlos Pignataro <cpignata@cisco.com> Thu, 13 September 2018 03:26 UTC

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Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Has Nits

This is a very well written and detailed document.

I have only one concern, which I believe should be addressed before moving this
document forward:

I found the rational and specific details on what this document "Updates" from
three previous RFCs to be lacking, and confusing.

I recommend an "Updates from RFC XYZ" section in which there is a textual
explanation and ideally Old/New specifics on how this document updates previous
RFCs. At least, something more inline with current thinking as per
https://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/ietf/current/msg109106.html

Thanks,

Carlos Pignataro.