Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> (The Tao of IETF: A Novice's Guide to the Internet Engineering Task Force) to Informational RFC]
Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Thu, 31 May 2012 08:59 UTC
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Subject: Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> (The Tao of IETF: A Novice's Guide to the Internet Engineering Task Force) to Informational RFC]
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I'm with Brian and Yoav on this. I don't see a need to change here. And I do think we might lose something if we become too PC. If a bunch of non-native speakers did say "yes, I found that made the document less useful" then I'd be more convinced that all these changes were worth it. On 05/31/2012 08:47 AM, Dave Crocker wrote: > > On 5/31/2012 9:24 AM, Brian E Carpenter wrote: >> I actually have no evidence either way; that's why I suggested asking >> some of them;-) > > 1. Reliance on self-reporting for such things is methodologically > problematic. It presumes a degree of self-awareness that is often > missing. For example a native speaker of a language that uses noun > doubling -- saying the noun twice -- to indicate plurals was quite > insistent with me that that wasn't the rule. > > 2. To claim a lack of evidence presumes some previous effort to acquire > it. However a quick search discloses: > > > http://journals.cambridge.org/action/displayAbstract;jsessionid=054711CCAB4AFB348F7E70C9079E7305.journals?fromPage=online&aid=2546012 Paywalled. Abstract says "comprehen-sibility of the non-native's interlanguage" so is a worse sinner IMO:-) > http://dc.library.okstate.edu/cdm/singleitem/collection/theses/id/1031/rec/9 Drives NoScript bonkers and needs some kind of FF plug in. > http://www.google.com/url?sa=t&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=web&cd=3&ved=0CF0QFjAC&url=http%3A%2F%2Fscholarcommons.usf.edu%2Fcgi%2Fviewcontent.cgi%3Farticle%3D1255%26context%3Detd&ei=iyDHT4eBB874sgaa-rGQDw&usg=AFQjCNFnYm2MzlDnknB6AzfB0Oi4tUVyVg 289 pages, so only read abstract. That's about adolescents. My experience at IETF meetings is that more native English speakers seem to behave like adolescents, but maybe that's just me:-) It does make the point that there's a (presumably positive) correlation between understanding of idiom and academic achievement, I guess the argument could also be made that the Tao should be about as difficult to read as a typical IETF mailing list. S. > > among others. > > The mere existence of these ought to make clear that there is a > significant issue in the use of colloquialisms with non-native listeners. > > d/
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Eliot Lear
- Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-… Brian E Carpenter
- Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffma… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Dave Crocker
- ICANN relationship [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Dave Crocker
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Yoav Nir
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Dave Crocker
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … SM
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Stephen Farrell
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Klaas Wierenga
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Simon Perreault
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… John C Klensin
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… Scott Brim
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Fred Baker
- Re: Mission statement [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoff… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Brian E Carpenter
- IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Melinda Shore
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Martin Rex
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Yoav Nir
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Ben Niven-Jenkins
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Joel jaeggli
- Making the Tao a web page Paul Hoffman
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Nick Hilliard
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Fadi Mohsen
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- RE: Making the Tao a web page GT RAMIREZ, Medel G.
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… John Levine
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Thierry Moreau
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Fred Baker
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… t.p.
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… Randy Bush
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call:<draft-hof… Yoav Nir
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Thomas Nadeau
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Nick Hilliard
- Re: IANA [Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… David Conrad
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Russ Housley
- Re: Colloquial language [Re: Last Call: <draft-ho… Joel jaeggli
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Eric Burger
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Melinda Shore
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page John C Klensin
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Lixia Zhang
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Dave Crocker
- Re: Making the Tao a web page SM
- Re: Making the Tao a web page Lucy Lynch
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Paul Hoffman
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Eliot Lear
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Bradner, Scott
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … Glen Zorn
- [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15… Glen Zorn
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Randy Bush
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Glen Zorn
- RE: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Yoav Nir
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… John Levine
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Ole Jacobsen
- Re: [Fwd: Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bi… Randy Bush
- Re: Last Call: <draft-hoffman-tao4677bis-15.txt> … John C Klensin