Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 16 December 2012 07:34 UTC

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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08
Date: Sun, 16 Dec 2012 09:32:03 +0200
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

 

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

 

Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-json-patch-08

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2012-12-16

IETF LC End Date: 2012-12-25

IESG Telechat date: 2013-1-10

 

Summary: This draft is almost  ready for publication.

 

 

Major issues:

 

Minor issues:

1.       The document has as the intended status "Informational" while the
last call says that the intended status is proposed standard?

 

 

Nits/editorial comments:

1.	In the IANA section the "Encoding considerations:  binary". I
noticed that RFC 4627 has a broader description:

"Encoding considerations: 8bit if UTF-8; binary if UTF-16 or UTF-32

JSON may be represented using UTF-8, UTF-16, or UTF-32.  When JSON is
written in UTF-8, JSON is 8bit compatible.  When JSON is written in UTF-16
or UTF-32, the binary content-transfer-encoding   must be used."