Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Wed, 26 April 2017 06:39 UTC

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From: Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 26 Apr 2017 16:39:07 +1000
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Subject: Re: Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-alto-multi-cost-08
To: "Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)" <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>
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On 26 April 2017 at 03:26, Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia - FR/Nozay)
<sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com> wrote:
>>>This document doesn't cite RFC 2119, but it uses the keywords.
> [SR     ] RFC 2119 is cited on page 1, section " Requirements Language" and section "9.1.  Normative References". Should it be referenced elsewhere?

The convention is to put those in the body, I missed it in the boilerplate.

I skimmed the other changes, and they look fine.