Re: Review of draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-ops-12

Randy Bush <randy@psg.com> Thu, 05 January 2017 11:12 UTC

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thanks roni.  i wonder how i missed your message.  my bad.

>> I think the document need an editorial review, a lot of text in
>> passive language, for example

i confess it is my normal mode, despite being a strunk and white fan.
sometimes rfced agrees, sometimes not and fixes.  unless it is a real
problem, i think i will not chase this one.

randy